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TWO SIDES - Uruha x Aoi - 2/?

Title: Two Sides
Chapters: 2/?
Author: venomousliberty
Genre: AU, Romance
Warnings: bad language
Rating: NC-17
Pairings/Characters: Uruha/Aoi
Synopsis: There are two sides to Kouyou Takashima that only Yuu Shiroyama knows about.
Comments: Some might remember this fic in my old account. I’ve decided to continue working on this again because it is my first fanfiction in the GazettE fandom and it is precious to me. Also, I have my muse back, so YAY!
Dedication: for sweetlolixo.




Chapter One

Chapter Two

“My name is Uruha and I can make you forget about Kouyou.”

Everything seemed to stop around me when I heard that, as every word in that sentence slowly pierced through my hazy comprehension. Kouyou was in front of me, but he didn’t call himself Kouyou, but Uruha. No matter how hard I try to understand what exactly was happening, it was difficult and utterly confusing. Surely, Kouyou wouldn’t go to such lengths just to make fun or tease me. I swallowed hard and even though it was difficult, I chose to take the most logical action I should take in that situation. Despite my entire body trembling in mixed fear, confusion and desire, I tried to push Kouyou away and glowered at him, my entire body felt hot and burning as my palms made contact with his firm chest. “S-stay away from me! Y-you don’t know what you’re doing, Kou!”

A deep chuckle escaped him as he ran his long fingers through his blond hair, his chrome-colored eyes piercing right through my soul. I immediately looked away, so as not to get captivated by his gaze again. “You’re really beautiful.” He spoke once more in that deep, alluring voice that made me want to lunge myself at him. “Please tell me your name.”

“You know what my name is!” I snapped at him, trying to gather my wits. He called me beautiful again, which should be so impossible to happen because Kouyou... Kouyou would just not do that. I began thinking of running away, leaving the room and crashing at Kai’s place just to avoid Kouyou or whoever this person was, but I was just wearing my pyjamas and Kai lived outside the dormitories. It wasn't really the smartest thing to do.

“I wouldn’t ask if I do, wouldn't I?” He replied and began caressing my cheek again, causing sparks to course all over my body.

I shivered and tried to scoot farther away from him, as if that was even possible. I was already in the farthest corner of my bed and the only thing preventing me from escaping Kouyou’s weird actions was the headboard. “It’s... Y-yuu. Have you forgotten, Kou?” I replied, hoping that my answer would make him stop from what he was doing.

He let out a small laugh as he took his hand away from my face. I cautiously gazed at him and saw his gorgeous face, that mesmerizing smile still present on his perfectly plump lips. “I envy Kouyou.” He said. “He gets to be with a beautiful being like you in one room.”

I gasped and stared at him with wide eyes. Did he just seriously say that? I couldn’t believe every word that he was saying. It was difficult when I knew that Kouyou would never say those things to me. Kouyou hated me. He hated me. Was this his way of getting back at me for betraying him? “Could you just stop! Shut the fuck up!” I screamed at him and finally found the strength to push him again, shove him away from me although I really wanted him close to me. “Just stop teasing me! Stop playing these stupid games to stir me up! You think I like seeing you like this? Doing this to me? This is not you, Kou! I love you but I'm not stupid to believe this bullshit!"

Kouyou just looked at me, his gaze confused, definitely surprised by my sudden outburst. I had no idea if that would finally make him stop from his cruel charade, but I hoped it would because I didn’t know what I’d do if he kept on acting like he wanted me. I’d just... I’d just hang onto false hopes that he loved me too.

I wasn’t sure how long we just looked at each other, how long this deafening silence had settled between us, but I wished for something to happen, anything just so I wouldn’t have to continue staring at him and his perfection, just so I wouldn’t hear my heart  and every part of me scream for him.

A smirk broke the thick silence between us, the alluring sound coming from Kouyou who looked undeterred by my anger. “Let me tell you a secret about Kouyou, Yuu.” He said, his voice low, thick with an ominous aura that was both mesmerizing and suffocating. “Kouyou isn’t the only one living in this body.”

I swallowed hard, my brain still having a hard time processing every word that he was saying. What did he fucking mean by that? That there were two souls in Kouyou’s body? That was just so impossible. Drivel. Such things only happened in movies or in books. It was an occurrence only possible in a fictional world. What he was saying was nonsense. "Bullshit." I uttered with venom dripping in my voice, my eyes shooting daggers at him. "Just stop! Shut the fuck up and stay away from me!"

But Kouyou didn't listen, still unaffected by my display of fury and if anything, he looked as if he knew what I was really thinking, what I really wanted and it was creepy, so creepy and all of a sudden I was thinking that maybe those absurd things that he were saying was true, that the person in front of me wasn't Kouyou, but someone else who seemed to be the complete opposite of him.

He moved closer to me once again, his movements reminiscent of a jaguar who was about to pounce on his prey. It was slow, calculating yet graceful and so sexy. "It's such a pity that you like him." He said as he continued approaching me. "A person like him could never love you back, but..."

A strangled moan escaped my throat once I realized how close he was to me again. As if he wasn't close enough, he leaned closer, bringing our faces together and I thought I was about to lose my head. This distance, the intensity in his eyes, the scent of his breath were all enough to drive me crazy.

"I can." He continued. "I can love you and I'll make you love me too." It seemed that everything around me just fell apart. I didn't know if I should feel scared or if I should rejoice upon hearing those desirous words from Kouyou's lips. But one thing was for sure, that statement was the epitome of temptation, a sign that I finally had a shot at obtaining something or someone that I wished I could have. But even before I could respond, he had already closed the distance between us and had captured my lips for a kiss.

No. This must be a dream.

This isn't happening.

There's no way that Kouyou is kissing me.

But I could feel his lips, moving against my own, tasting me and they were soft, warm, sweet and they felt so good. What was left of my sanity, my self-control, were all gone. They were dissolved to dust and was flown away by the wind. It was difficult to fight this temptation, to fight this desire for a person who hated you. It was so damn difficult to push Kouyou away when I wanted him so fucking much. So I kissed him back, finally giving in, killing that annoying little voice in my head that said this was wrong and responded needily, desperately, opening my mouth for him to deepen the kiss.

His arms snaked around my body, pulling me up, closer to him as our tongues and teeth clashed. I closed my eyes, wrapping my arms around him and revelled on the sensation of his soft lips and his own unique taste that reminded me of vanilla mixed with my favorite brand of nicotine. It was probably a weird concoction, but for me, it was the most delicious and alluring flavor I had ever tasted and I needed to have more.

I kissed him harder to the point that I knew I was probably inflicting pain on him, but he didn’t show any kind of dislike towards it. If anything, he grabbed the back of my head and kissed back with the same ardor. All I could hear was the sound of our ragged breathing, the violent clash of our teeth, the wet sounds produced by both of our lips and the rapid beating of my heart in my chest. I had far gone cared if what we were doing was wrong. All I wanted was to take all of him... all of...

“Kouyou...” I breathlessly moaned as we momentarily broke apart to rush some air into our lungs. I was about to dive in and capture his lips once more when he jerked away from me. I looked confusedly at him, and maybe I also looked desperate. My eyes met his gaze, searching, silently asking and pleading.

He smirked, his auburn orbs were teasing, a malicious glint present in those beautiful saucers. “You might want to call my name the next time I kiss you, Yuu.” He said.

His name...

“U-uruha?” I asked hesitantly, feeling slightly uncomfortable calling him in a different name when I knew who he really was. But if it was true that Kouyou has two souls, personality, whatever, then maybe I should just sit back, enjoy the ride and go with the flow. Maybe it was alright if I called him Uruha.

“Yeah. Very good, Yuu.” He answered with a wide, satisfied smile before he leaned in and planted a small peck on my lips.

I blinked at him. That was it? A peck? But  I...

I wanted more.

I averted his gaze as I tried to catch my breath, hoping that I didn’t make a fool out of myself for craving more of his lips. I also had to take note that the person in front of me, currently holding me was not Kouyou but another persona who called himself Uruha.

Such a beautiful name...

But it was still difficult to accept, even to comprehend that Kouyou had another side in him that he didn’t even seem to know about. Wait. Was Kouyou aware of Uruha’s existence?

I cautiously looked at Kouyou again and was still shocked by the tender expression he had on his handsome face, an expression that he wouldn’t even bother show to me if he really was Uruha. “D-does Kouyou know...”

“About me?” Uruha finished for me. “No, he doesn’t. He has no idea that I exist so this is a secret between us.”

A secret... I had no idea if I should feel relieved or worried that I was about to keep a dark, dreadful secret about Kouyou. Frankly speaking, I didn’t even know if I should meet Uruha again. “I... I think I can’t be a part of your secret.” I uttered lowly as I avoided his gaze. I knew this was not good. I felt like I was taking advantage of Kouyou for giving in to his alter-ego..

Kouyou’s long fingers affectionately touched my jaw and gently directed me to look at him again. “You already are whether you like it or not, Yuu.” He softly replied. “Don’t worry, I won’t hurt you and what Kouyou doesn’t know won’t hurt him, hm?”

I just gazed at him, my eyes filled with worry and hesitation. Maybe looking at things that way would make everything easier, but Kouyou was still my friend, despite the immense hate that he harbored towards me and I still loved him. Uruha... Uruha was technically Kouyou but he was far from the man I loved. Actually, he was everything that I ever wanted Kouyou to be and most of all, he was willing, willing to love me back. “Are you really not Kouyou?” I inquired again even though I’ve already realized that this person in front of me was not truly Kouyou.

Uruha smiled and planted a small kiss on the tip of my nose. “I’ll prove to you that I’m not when we meet again.”

“When will that be?” I asked almost immediately. I wasn’t excited or anything. Well, maybe I was, but I wanted to be prepared if ever there would be a next time.

He chuckled, amused by my sudden eagerness. “Soon. It really depends on Kouyou’s emotional and mental state. But we will meet again. I promise you that.” He answered as he gently laid me back on my bed and pulled the covers over me. “For now, you have to rest.”

“ But I’m still not sleepy yet and I still have lots of things to ask you.” I protested. I didn’t want to go to sleep yet. I wanted to talk to him, confirm things, find out how and why Kouyou ended up having another personality living inside him and most of all, just be with him like this, holding me, looking affectionately at me as if he really loved me.

“We’ll have time for that when we meet again.” He answered in a sweet, tender voice that only made me yearn for him. I just wasn’t sure if I was still yearning for Kouyou or for Uruha, though. Kouyou’s other personality was so different from him. Uruha was charming, alluring and he exuded this irresistible aura of sexiness that was so difficult to ignore or deflect. Frankly, I thought it wasn’t really difficult to fall or like Uruha.

I didn’t say anything back and just looked at him. Now that I was lying on my bed again, I did feel a little weary and my eyelids suddenly felt so heavy. It was as if Uruha had hypnotized me to feeling and believing that I was tired and I needed sleep. I inhaled slowly, a random yet important question suddenly popping inside my head. “Do you really like me?” I voiced out my question without hesitation. It was my first time meeting him after all and he had already reached first base. I had to know if he just liked me because I liked Kouyou or because he really did find me attractive or likeable.

He released another smirk. He brought a hand to my face and lovingly touched my cheek. “I like you more than you can even comprehend, Yuu.” He responded, his voice barely a whisper. I wasn't’ sure if I should believe him but my mind was too hazy and confused to care at this point. I just wanted Kouyou and Uruha seemed to be willing to give what I couldn’t get from him. I might be stupid hanging onto false hopes or maybe even foolish and heartless for actually using Uruha just so I could satisfy my desire for Kouyou but the yearning in my heart and my love for Kouyou was stronger than the muffled pleas and screams of my conscience and sanity.

-----

I woke up to the sound of Kouyou’s voice who was currently spouting curses left and right. He sounded upset and he seemed to be moving fast around our shared room.

“Shit! I’m late! I’m so fucking late!”

I slowly opened my eyes and without even thinking I sat up and sleepily looked at him, causing him to pause in the middle of the room and stare at me. He looked a little distressed but in my eyes he was still perfect.

“What the fuck are you looking at?” He barked, his chocolate brown eyes gleaming with nothing but hate and disgust, effectively snapping me out of my drowsy state and giving me flashbacks of the events that happened last night.

Uruha...

I quickly looked away and pulled the covers over me, hiding my shocked and fearful expression from him as I questioned myself. Did Kouyou really talk to me last night? Did he really embrace me? Kiss me? Did Uruha really exist? I bit my lower lip, swallowing a strangled whimper as I struggled to calm down and stop myself from shaking violently underneath my blanket or cry from fear that everything that happened last night was nothing but a dream.

I heard Kouyou sneered and walked around the room again. In less than a minute, the sound of the door banging violently against its frame assaulted my ears, hinting that he had finally left. I continued hiding underneath the blanket, confused, scared and had probably gone out of my mind. Kouyou still looked at me with those eyes full of fury and he still treated me as if I was his mortal enemy. It was a huge sign that maybe I was just dreaming last night and Uruha wasn’t real. I dreaded over that harsh reality and tried not to cry over someone that wasn’t really a true person after all.

I had no idea how long I shivered in my bed, under the protective layer of the covers that didn’t do much to make me feel better, but I was snapped out of my pitiful state when my phone suddenly rang. I didn’t want to answer it. I didn’t want to talk to anyone, but the voice of my favorite vocalist continued grating on my nerves and with a groan, I pulled the covers off me, reached for the vibrating piece of device on the bedside table and checked who was calling me.

I slapped my forehead as I discovered who it was, taking a deep breath and trying to calm myself down before answering the call. “Kai?”

“Yuu! Where the hell are you? Did you sleep in? In case you want to know, our first class starts in ten minutes!” My friend yelled at me from the other line.

Without even thinking, I hung up and jumped off the bed, thoughts of Uruha and what happened last night momentarily forgotten as I hurried to the bathroom to wash my face and get dressed.

-----

I like you more than you can even comprehend, Yuu.

Those were the last words I heard before I allowed sleep to take over me last night. Maybe everything was a dream. Maybe Uruha was just a figment of my imagination, a product of my deep yearning for Kouyou. Maybe everything, that kiss, that embrace, those words, weren’t true after all. But if so, why did it seem and feel so real? I could still feel Uruha’s lips on mine. I could still taste him, smell the sweet scent of his breath and feel his arms around me. It was difficult for me to accept that everything was just a dream.

I let out another sigh, the lecture of my professor sounded muffled in my ears as my attention was focused on something else and that state didn’t just happen during my first class, but also in my next classes after that. My friend Kai obviously knew that something was wrong with me and tried to coax me into talking about it, but I told him I didn’t want to talk, that I needed some time alone. Actually, I had no intentions of telling him that my roommate possibly had split personality disorder and his alter-ego liked me. I was sure that my friend would think I was insane if I told him that.

Thankfully, my last class finished immediately and blurting a quick goodbye to Kai, I hurriedly ran back to the dormitories and crashed on my bed to wait for Kouyou.

-----

For the umpteenth time, I checked the time on my phone and listened to Kouyou’s every actions. Kouyou got back earlier than the usual this evening and even went to the bathroom to probably change into his pyjamas before going to bed. He still wasn’t talking to me and I could feel the weight of his death glare whenever I came across his line of vision.

Minutes and hours passed by since Kouyou went to bed and all I could hear was Kouyou’s soft breathing. He seemed to be having a good dream in his sleep and showed no signs of waking up or changing to a new position anytime soon. I felt a sharp ache in my chest as I mulled over the thought that maybe Uruha was just someone I met in a dream, that I’d never see him again and all he gave me were the things that I wanted to avoid having the most, false hopes. I was hanging onto these stupid feelings and making myself believe that I had a chance with Kouyou through this persona who called himself Uruha. It was ridiculous. The thought itself was absurd and I felt stupid for even entertaining such ideas.

I climbed off my bed and went to the bathroom. I seriously needed to go to sleep because I had to get up early and make it to my first class without being late tomorrow. Maybe washing my face again and freshening up would help me clear these disturbing thoughts away. I turned on the faucet and splashed some water on my face  After that, I looked at myself in the mirror, a routine that I automatically did before and after using the sink, seeing huge bags already forming underneath my eyes. I looked tired and I definitely didn’t look my best during that ungodly hour of the night. Releasing another groan and brushing my hair with my fingers, I turned my back on my own reflection and grabbed a towel from the rack to wipe my face with.

I was so dead set on going to sleep and forgetting about Uruha and everything about him when I was inside the bathroom, but when I opened the door, such thoughts were quickly thrown out the window for there, standing in front of me was Kouyou, who was flashing a gorgeous, heart-wrenching smile in my direction.

“Good evening, beautiful.” He smoothly greeted which made me question if I was dreaming again or if Kouyou just really talked to me and called me beautiful, an act that only Uruha could do.

I gazed at him with wide, confused eyes and even before I could say something, I pinched myself hard, just to make sure. It hurts. I felt immense pain burn on my arm, a clear indication that I was fully awake and I wasn’t dreaming. “Uruha.” I moaned, my voice was faint, low and to me, it sounded very surprised, relieved, desperate even. Without even thinking, I launched myself at him and hugged him, tight, my eyes closed shut as I reveled on the warmth given by his body.

I felt his arms circle around me and felt those soft lips kissing my hair. “Did you miss Kouyou or did you miss me?” He asked, a hint of amusement present in his deep voice.

I looked up and stared deeply at him. “I missed you.” I replied before smashing our lips together.

-----

AN: I feel like a lunatic writing this chapter. I enjoyed it, though and I realized that writing a cool, seductive Uruha was so much fun. I had to take a break whenever I felt my heart thumping in too much excitement and love for Uruha. Frankly speaking, I do prefer Uruha over Kouyou. Sorry, Kou-chan. XD I just feel that Yuu gave in to Uruha too quickly, ne? But who wouldn’t... seriously? *drools* I just hope you liked this installment, especially you sweetlolixo and I’m so sorry for the long wait. Comments are welcome and loved. Thank you~ ^^



Comments

( 47 comments — Leave a comment )
venomousliberty
Aug. 22nd, 2012 12:15 pm (UTC)
Spot for sweetlolixo... if ever she chooses to comment.
sweetlolixo
Aug. 23rd, 2012 10:51 am (UTC)
I love you for saving this spot for me without me saying it <3 I love spots. And I love you for updating this amazing story. ♡

This is such a fantastic story, but I'm in the midst of studying Physics now so I'll read this later ;~; I can't give into temptations... but just so you know, I can't wait. ♡
venomousliberty
Aug. 23rd, 2012 11:20 am (UTC)
No worries, bb~ Just concentrate on your exams and studies for now and just read it whenever you have time. It's not going anywhere, I promise. ^^ I just hope this update would not disappoint. I feel a little nervous about this chapter. *shifty eyes*
sweetlolixo
Aug. 27th, 2012 04:30 am (UTC)
URUUUUUUHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA ♡ you seem to be fond of spamming his pics on your LJ, LOL I LOVE THIS URUHAAAAAAA 8D so flirty and seductive, its no wonder why Yuu gives in so easily!!! I WOULD TOO!!!! TAKE ME URUHA SAMA TAKE ME. AND KICK KOUYOU'S ASS. I HOPE THEY MORPH INTO ONE SOMEDAY - Yuu was originally in love with Kou afterall, it's the same person and GAHAHAHAHA tooo complicated xD Oh god I sound drunk like a Uruha who drank too much. I JUST WOKE UP FROM MY NAP. AND IM BURNING. Physically. Lol i puked three times this morning TTATT Reading your fic makes it all better I was smiling all the way on a bus ride home LOLOL.

Wow but it must be tiring on Yuu's part lololol. Staying up late at night just for Uruha lololol AND THEN THE SEX. HOW DOES HE DO IT. HOW DOES HE. I guess anything for Uruha.... I LOVE THE BATHROOM SCENE OMG aoi's life is so exciting. Opens door, BAM, Uruha pops up lol. Poor Uruuuu has to juggle with his secret activities that he doesn't even know exist gahahahhaha wait no. He deserves it. :p

Its ok that you took so... long. xD IT'S WORTH IT. I'm sorry I'm not on par with my fangirling standard today I just ... Today is an off day lol

OK I LOVE U UPDATE SOOOOOON bye <3
venomousliberty
Aug. 27th, 2012 09:32 am (UTC)
Thank you for reading, bb. I'm relieved and glad that you liked it. After all, your comment is the most important comment in this story so... XDD

I'm not giving away and clues as to what will happen to them in the future. But rest assured that they will have the happy ending they deserve. XD

And just so you know, I am excited to write the smut. *naughty smirk*

Eh? Really? I think your fangirling is just fine. I hope you feel better now. Please take care of yourself. ^^
anknick
Aug. 22nd, 2012 03:14 pm (UTC)
Whoa.. I had almost forgotten about this fic.. Sorry.. >.>
Annnnnd.. I liked it.. And maybe it's too early but i can;t wait for the time that Kouyou comes to know of his split personality disorder.. and also the things he does to Yuu as Uruha.. *evil smirk*
Anyway.. It was really good and made my shitty day! XD
venomousliberty
Aug. 22nd, 2012 08:25 pm (UTC)
OMG! I can't wait for that time too! I just wish I'd have enough sanity when it comes to that scene. I hafta admit, writing this fic literally drives me crazy. I sometimes even regret writing it, hahaha!

Nonetheless, I'm glad it made you feel better, dear. *hugs and gives you Uruha cookies to make you happier*
anknick
Aug. 23rd, 2012 05:26 pm (UTC)
When will that time come?!! *shakes you by the shoulder*
XD
Why do you regret writing it? It's going awesome.. *nods vigorously*
My brain just draws a blank on anything creative nowadays.. -_-
anyway.. Hope to see you update this soon!!! *noms on Uruha cookies..* XD
venomousliberty
Aug. 23rd, 2012 08:23 pm (UTC)
Uh... soon. When I find time to work on it. Hopefully, it's not gonna take me months again. *sweat drops*

Haha! I dunno. I just thought it has a really complicated plot, you know. I'll definitely rack my brain for it. XDD

I'm sure you'll find your muse soon. I'm looking forward to seeing more of your artworks. ^^
luvthe_gazette
Aug. 22nd, 2012 10:40 pm (UTC)
Oh shit! Update!! I think I’m going to worship you for the rest of my life!
luvthe_gazette
Aug. 22nd, 2012 10:59 pm (UTC)
It’s such a pity that Kouyou doesn’t like Yuu D: but at least there’s Uruha to make it up for Yuu -ω-
venomousliberty
Aug. 23rd, 2012 12:10 am (UTC)
Glad you liked this, bb~ Thank you for reading.^^ OH,do you think it'll be okay to post this in the AoixUruha comm even though it's an UruAoi fic? I have doubts posting it there because of that. -_-"
luvthe_gazette
Aug. 23rd, 2012 10:25 am (UTC)
:D

I think it's ok. Even though it's uruxaoi it's still a fic with Aoi and Uruha, I don't think who is seme and uke matters...
venomousliberty
Aug. 23rd, 2012 11:22 am (UTC)
Thanks, bb~ I already posted it. I don't care if people would bash me for posting it there. XDD Me too. I both love Aoiha and Uruaoi. XDD
luvthe_gazette
Aug. 23rd, 2012 11:40 am (UTC)
*nods* As long as the fic is about our favourite guitarists all the rest are irrelevant :D
sweetlolixo
Aug. 23rd, 2012 10:48 am (UTC)
Sweetheart... It doesn't matter. I don't see the problem between the pairing/x-posting it there, I do it all the time... And it is honestly the only way people look for Aoiha fics. It shouldn't (and isn't) an issue, I understand your doubts but there isn't a distinction between the two pairings my dear, it's the same two people :)

PS: and anyone who says so otherwise is a bitch and can choose not to click on it :/

Edited at 2012-08-23 10:52 am (UTC)
venomousliberty
Aug. 23rd, 2012 11:26 am (UTC)
Thanks, dear. I already posted it there. I was just like 'Fuck it. Damn those who would bitch at me for posting this here. Like i care.'

Your support does miracles for me, seriously. skfjslfjksjfklsj
sweetlolixo
Aug. 23rd, 2012 11:52 am (UTC)
No one would scold you! If they do, they have to come through me FIRST. Plus, no one would be fussy coz your plot is so amazing anyway! I love it. No questions asked. I don't know why you're so insecure all the time! *__*

You + your writing + this OTP <3 + dedication = happy Sally <33
venomousliberty
Aug. 23rd, 2012 08:25 pm (UTC)
It's nice to know that I have a defender in ya. *hugs* I'm not insecure. I just get really nervous... *awkward chuckle*

And that last sentence made me so happy. :)
(Anonymous)
Aug. 23rd, 2012 03:09 am (UTC)
Hey! Baby, thank you, thank you thank you thank you thank you!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks so much for updating this. Ang galing!
Love u love u love u love u love u love u love u love u!!!
venomousliberty
Aug. 23rd, 2012 10:05 am (UTC)
Thanks dear. -_-
kitty_luvs_noms
Aug. 23rd, 2012 05:21 am (UTC)
Yay! Another chapter! I love it. ^^
venomousliberty
Aug. 23rd, 2012 10:10 am (UTC)
Thank you~ ^^
(Anonymous)
Aug. 23rd, 2012 11:10 am (UTC)
comment from me.
Okay. It's time to get serious. Seriously, when I started reading it, I said "I thought Hime's gonna write the sequel but this was kinda different, though the summary/intro was the same as the one I'd read months ago." So I thought, "Ah, I think she changed the plot but with the same conflict, characters, setting etc." As I continued reading, I started laughing, especially when I visualized Uruha--how he changed from one personality to another. My MOST favorite part is "What's your name, beautiful?" I laughed like crazy on this part! I could also imagine Yuu's fear when the person he loved who kept ignoring him had just turned different. Kyaaaahhhh! And the kiss...oh my! I wanted to say "Aoi pwede bang palit tayo?" hahahahaha! I admit I hadn't noticed that I was laughing like crazy. And yeah! It hurts like hell when the one you love is just a few steps away yet he seems to be so far. Hmm...what else? I'm just happy that you did not throw this away coz this is the first JRock fanfic I've appreciated and loved. Okay, ang haba na. Thanks so much Hime! I love you!
venomousliberty
Aug. 23rd, 2012 11:29 am (UTC)
Eri, is that you? You have got to tell me who you are so I could glomp the fuck out of you because of this awesome-tastic comment! Who are you, creeper? XDD

EDIT: Langya, Ivony! Ikaw lang pala! Why did you comment again when you've already commented. Nonetheless, I'll still glomp you to death for this!!! XD

Edited at 2012-08-23 11:34 am (UTC)
wats_blue
Aug. 23rd, 2012 11:19 am (UTC)
Ooh update!
venomousliberty
Aug. 23rd, 2012 11:35 am (UTC)
Thank you~ I will, soon, hopefully. XDD
kysume
Aug. 23rd, 2012 04:05 pm (UTC)
The long awaited sequal prepqual to DUAL ! *___*
I'm sorry I didn't comment on DUAL before but I really liked your story and am happy you wrote this!
venomousliberty
Aug. 23rd, 2012 08:36 pm (UTC)
It's okay. ^^ I'm glad you were excited for the prequel/sequel. :) Thanks for reading and commenting. *gives Uruha cookies*
veroxion
Aug. 23rd, 2012 08:21 pm (UTC)
I didn't notice you updated because Livejournal hasn't been sending me notifications... ;_;

AHH BUT YOU UPDATED. Do you know how long I've been waiting for this? DO YOU? Well, let's just say a very long time. :D

Wow, Uruha is such a smooth guy in the fic. It's a strange change from the Uruha I usually see in fics, but I guess it suits his personally in this story. I mean, he's completely charmed the pants off Aoi oh wait that hasn't happened... yet lol and is just downright sexy. There. I said it. But he hasn't risen from his place on my bias list. Yet. We'll see, but you're severely tempting me, haha. XD

Aw, Yuu is so cute, sweet and hesitant. LEMME SQUISH HIM. ; A ; Why is Kouyou so mean to him? I don't like his personality at all... he seemed nice at first, but now he's just downright cruel. No squishy hugs for him. >_>"

Excellent update, sweetie! I have sooo many questions. Like what happens when Kouyou finds out about Uruha... and about Yuu as well. I think he'll freak and just avoid Yuu even more and just be a total dick. It's kinda weird as well... because there's Uruha... and Kouyou, but they aren't the same person. Like, they obviously share the same body but they are technically two completely different personalities, and therefore, people. So it's fucking up my OTP. Kinda. XD

Looking forward to the next chapter!!
venomousliberty
Aug. 24th, 2012 02:51 am (UTC)
Gaaahhh! That was such a long and nice comment from you. lskdjfslkdjskljfskjfskfjskfjkfjksfljf *claws the wall and proceeds to vomit unicorns and rainbows* Thank you~

I'm glad you liked and I'm terribly sorry for the long wait. This fic basically depletes all of my brain cells and energy, seriously, so it took me time to finish this chapter even though it wasn't really long. (pfft... excuses)

Okay, one of my goal is to have Uruha climb up your bias list, kufufufu. There's more of sexy Uruha coming in the next chapters. Frankly speaking, I really love Uruha in this fic, like, you have no idea how fucking much! I think I kinda understand you now when you said that you love your fics and characters very much. :D

A lot will definitely happen...yes. *nods* I just hope I'll be sane enough to write and finish this story. Thanks for reading and the wonderful comment, Vero~ ^^ *gives you Aoi cookies and candies*
veroxion
Aug. 27th, 2012 10:19 pm (UTC)
LOL. You're welcome, sweetie. XD

Ah. I know what you mean. It's kinda like that with Miai at the moment, lmfao. I understand completely. ;P It's still nice to see wonderful updates, though, no matter how long they take! ;)

I'd really like to see Uruha climb my bias list... 'cause it's gonna be hard. But I do love him very much, no mistake about that. ^^

siberianclaws
Aug. 24th, 2012 01:36 am (UTC)
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LADY, I AM SO HAPPY THAT YOU UPDATED THIS FIC.
SO FUCKIN' HAPPY!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Tsk.Tsk.Tsk.
Yuu, this is trouble. It's complicated than what appears.
I mean I do understand his side, he's so desperate for love, this unrequited love towards Kouyou he is willing to turn a blind eye on his morals and conscience just to take anything Uruha is willing to give.
But then who does he really love?
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! I can't wait for the next chapters to come and on how you're going to complicate their relationships and twists their emotions haywire.

P.S.
I really LOVE your story!

XOXO
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venomousliberty
Aug. 24th, 2012 03:03 am (UTC)
Kyaaaa! Yes, I am screaming my fangirl scream here, woman. I just didn't expect to receive a comment from you after dealing with a difficult student. You definitely made me feel better. XDD

I'm happy that you liked the update. I seriously thought it sucked and things were just moving too fast, but I think if a person is madly in love, like Yuu, turning away from temptations is difficult. And yes, I feel for him too. *pats Yuu's head* He's probably blinded by Uruha's charm for now, but let's see in the next chapters, ne?^^

Thanks for reading and the awesome comment, dear.^^

P.S.
Love the emoticons you used, btw.
erisawachika
Aug. 24th, 2012 04:32 am (UTC)
Yessu. My promise to comment on your lj lsdfkj /shame on me/

Uh-huh, Uruha I love you baby and Kouyou seriously how can you dislike Yuu, you're so sdfkasjklfsjdf I seriously hate you Kouyou TuT /I hope I'm not the only one lol xD/

Yuu >__> Seriously, stop thinking if all of it was just a dream or what not. I know Kouyou is a fucking catch and all but you have Uruha now!!!! OMG GIMME URUHA TOO ;A; But I love you Yuu, so adorbale ;3;

And big yay for Kai *chu~

LOVE THIS LOVE THIS LOVE THIS SUPER *U*

I'm Aoiha deprived so you must update soon ha ha ha *huggles*
venomousliberty
Aug. 24th, 2012 08:47 am (UTC)
LOL. You're epic reactions never fail to amuse me, bb. I'm glad that you liked it. I'm Aoiha deprived too and I wish I have more time to write more, but I'll try.

Yes... I love Uruha too and I also want him for myself. He's just so sexy in this ficcu skfjslkfjsfljsfksfjls!!! And I didn't mean for Aoi to be that cute, but I couldn't help it. XDD

Thanks again, bb~ Love ya. *hugs*
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venomousliberty
Aug. 24th, 2012 08:49 am (UTC)
Gah! Me too~ I think almost everyone hate Kouyou in this fic. XD

Thanks for the comment and for reading, my dear~ ^^
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venomousliberty
Aug. 25th, 2012 03:31 am (UTC)
Cool~ Thanks for reading. ^^ There is a reason why Kouyou is homophobic so let's try not to go all hating on him yet. XD And thank you so much for your comment. You've made my plot bunnies happy. I've also noticed the decline in fics these days. It's quite sad. I guess a lot of people in the fandom or at least in this comm are busy. :/
faewitchkins
Aug. 26th, 2012 02:00 am (UTC)
Tried to leave a comment last night but LJ was not playing nice. Felt so bad for Yuu with the harsh way that Kouyou rejected him. In the beginning he seemed so nice and beautiful and damn near perfect, who'd have thought he could be so cruel. Uruha is something else altogether. Kouyou takes your breath away but Uruha makes you purr... and the banter between Uru and Yuu make me smile, witty, smart, and fun.

Looking forward to the next chapter and how the 'affair' between Uruha and Aoi progresses and how it affects Kouyou.
venomousliberty
Aug. 26th, 2012 07:19 am (UTC)
Kouyou takes your breath away but Uruha makes you purr...

I just... love this statement. I'm glad you like it and you didn't give up on dropping a comment even though LJ was being mean. Thank you! Thank you! I'll try my best to update soon. ^^
(Anonymous)
Aug. 30th, 2012 03:53 pm (UTC)
This is livejournal user:"ladyserena" for some reason, my phone won't let me log in, but I wanted to tell you again how utterly amazing this story is! Aoi is just so well written, and I can't wait to see where this is going with kouyou/uruha. You've created something really unique here! Keep up the great work! Can't wait for the next chapter!
venomousliberty
Aug. 30th, 2012 08:41 pm (UTC)
Thank you for that wonderful comment and for still leaving one even though you couldn't log in. Thank you~ *gives brownies* I'm glad you're liking the story so far. I'll try to update as soon as possible. :)
gabbyrockzz
Aug. 31st, 2012 08:55 am (UTC)
wahh I love this!!!
Kou is soo mean! how will this go on? :3
Next please!
deadlyscarlet
Sep. 4th, 2012 06:07 am (UTC)
Again I know i'm late..so sorry m(_ _)m

tis chapter was really good...i feel so sorry for poor Yuu..i wanna cry so badly seeing the state he is in...and i wanna punch Kouyou for being a fucking homophobe..it's okay to reject Yuu but y the hell is he berating him like this >< sorry dude u r in my hate list right now...

but Uruha..he's goddamn smexy and actually nice...seeing Uruha i'm like disappear already Kouyou and let Uruha takeover u even though i knw its impossible ;_; but still i applaud ur Uruha..he is so damn, uber cool...i really do wait for the day to see Kouyou's reaction when he finds out LMAO...

plz update soon BB ^^
venomousliberty
Sep. 4th, 2012 10:57 am (UTC)
LOL. Everybody hates Kouyou and loves Uruha these days. Can't blame. I'm also annoyed at Kouyou and I'm head over heels in love with Uruha! HE'S SO HOTTTTTTT!!!

Thanks for the comment, bb~ Life's pretty rough for me these days. But I feel better now after hearing from you. I'm glad you're okay. :)
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